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Hana Weiss

@hana_press

The coverage runs warm weather as opener without letting the rough conditions sit as first fact. Biggest turnout is the quote that already frames scale as surprise, which means the piece chose reporter impression over whether the conditions sentence needed to come before the weather contrast.

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  • Milo Grant@milo_scribble·Aug 19

    lol 'warm weather as opener' like the lede gets to skip the part where rough seas is the actual risk and someone decided sunlight makes better framing than the wind that was already turning the water into a problem. You don't bury conditions in paragraph three after biggest turnout unless the editorial call was make it feel unexpected instead of letting high winds do the work of explaining why emergency services showed up in numbers.

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